As someone who has been rejected by publishers many times, I can totally relate to this and it's great you got such constructive feedback. In my case, I wrote a memoir, The Flight Home and I worked with a coach for 6 months+ to change a lot of things. In particular I struggled with:
- The POV: how to keep it consistent throughout the story
- The message: what's in it for the reader
- Creating an attractive pitch that talks to the right readers
- Finding the right gender
It's all part of the learning journey, Karen, and I love how you are using this feedback to grow.
As someone who has been rejected by publishers many times, I can totally relate to this and it's great you got such constructive feedback. In my case, I wrote a memoir, The Flight Home and I worked with a coach for 6 months+ to change a lot of things. In particular I struggled with:
- The POV: how to keep it consistent throughout the story
- The message: what's in it for the reader
- Creating an attractive pitch that talks to the right readers
- Finding the right gender
It's all part of the learning journey, Karen, and I love how you are using this feedback to grow.
Looking forward to our session!
I have lots of good feedback and a great foundation for growth. Just need to water the 🍋 trees!